“My Room”

Today my 100-word flash piece “My Room” was published.

I wrote this little guy a couple of years ago for a contest that never was. Back when I had a couple flash pieces published by another magazine, I submitted this as well, but they found the content too disturbing for publication.

I never did think it was all that bad. Hope you enjoy.

6 thoughts on ““My Room””

  1. I write flash horror and I have to say, 100 words of less is extremely challenging. You did a wonderful and pleasantly wicked short!

  2. Thanks! Glad you all liked it.

    Like most of my writing, as I reread it I spotted a few things I would love to change, including a couple commas that don't need to be there, but what can ya do…

    Yeah, that last line is what kept it from previous publication. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. This was great! I loved the "naked lightbulb" it was a nice description of desolation… and i chuckled at the ending, was not expecting that but it was a goodun!

    Congrats ๐Ÿ˜€

  4. Thanks, K! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I sure hope I can keep up the pace of stories coming out. ๐Ÿ˜€

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